Philosophical Doggerel

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I see the moon
The moon sees me
Two faces connect
Across time and distance

I see the moon
Wherever I go
A familiar face
Something constant

But does the moon see me?
Does she miss me?
Does she seek my face?
Am I too changeable?

I see the moon
I hope the moon sees me

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