Ship in a Bottle

Thing of wonder
Talking point
Focal point
Apogee
One moment taken
Preserved forever
Is it just the one
Frozen in time
Or a flotilla
Smaller
Moments

But that ship has sailed
Maybe sunk

I'd love to know what you think, concrit is especially welcomed on fiction pieces. Thank you.

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