Rocks in My Baggage

You ask me why I’m carrying it all around
You ask why I don’t just put it down
I point out the ‘do not leave your baggage unattended’ sign
And I remind myself
These are what I signed up for
The responsibilities that I promised to
But their load gets no easier
And there’s nowhere else to put them
And who else should carry them for me?

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